Class Meeting

We got feedback from our film so far from our class. Most of the feedback was very positive but we were also given things to improve. One piece of feedback which we plan to take on board was to cut down some scenes where the stalker was chasing the girl as it was just the same shot of running for quite a long time. We plan to cut down some of these scenes, not only to take on this feedback but also to cut down on time as the brief says to make the film "approximately five minutes".

Another piece of feedback we got was to make it more obvious that the stalker was filming the girl on their phone during the bench scene. We plan to do this by having footage of the stalker filming from their phone. This will work well because in the footage we already have, the stalker is pointing their phone toward the girl and it will therefore be simple to direct attention to that.